changeset 39:b231022614aa

Proof-reading
author Dominic Cleal <dominic@computerkb.co.uk>
date Sun, 25 Jan 2009 20:03:54 +0000
parents 558b63789352
children 20870c5d9b45
files reproctool.cgi
diffstat 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) [+]
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--- a/reproctool.cgi	Sun Jan 25 20:00:30 2009 +0000
+++ b/reproctool.cgi	Sun Jan 25 20:03:54 2009 +0000
@@ -113,12 +113,12 @@
 on how it looks in game.
 <p />
 Mineral prices below are empire averages from <a
-href="http://www.eve-central.com/">Eve-central</a>. Usually you dont need to
-update those yourself, unless the Eve central is down, or you live in
-special area's and are not welcome in empire space anymore.
+href="http://www.eve-central.com/">EVE-Central</a>. Usually you dont need to
+update those yourself, unless the EVE-Central is down, or you live in
+special areas and are not welcome in empire space anymore.
 <p />
 How does this work? Well, you need to copy paste an item list (text) in the
-input box below. Then press submit. Getting this item list from our
+input box below, then press submit. Getting this item list from your
 inventory is simple, albeit unusual. Follow these steps:
 <ol>
     <li>Put all the items in a container in your station</li>
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@
     <li>A popup will appear which will list the items in the container!
     Richt click the text area of the popup, and select 'Copy'.</li>
     <li>Cancel the contract creation! (We only needed the item list, there
-    is no contract needed.</li>
+    is no contract needed).</li>
     <li>Paste the text you just copied in the text box below, and click
     'Submit'.</li>
     <li>The page will take some seconds to load, be patient. If the server
@@ -277,21 +277,21 @@
     <li>items in <font color='#00FF00'>green</font> are above meta 5.</li>
 </ul>
 <p />
-The number below the item represents the itemvalue if you would reprocess
-and sell the minerals on the market. Basicly, if you have the option of
+The number below the item represents the item's value if you would reprocess
+and sell the minerals on the market. Basically, if you have the option of
 selling that item for a price below that number, its better to keep the item
 and reprocess it.
 <p />
-As you might see, the items are listed just like your inventory in Eve. The
+As you might see, the items are listed just like your inventory in EVE. The
 sorting is the same as when you sort by type. If you have this browser
-window next to your inventory window, matching the colums(!), it is very
+window next to your inventory window, matching the columns(!), it is very
 easy to pick out those valuable items.
 <p />
-Tip: Because this can be a huge page to load in eve, resising might freeze the
+Tip: Because this can be a huge page to load in EVE, resizing might freeze the
 game a bit.<br />
-Also, clickin on the item gives you the general information of that item. It
+Also, clicking on the item gives you the general information of that item. It
 is not the same as clicking 'Show info' on the real item. (For example: the
-real item might be damanged.)<br />
+real item might be damaged.)<br />
 <a href="http://rammsrdi.com">Ramm's RDI</a>.
 <p />
 <hr>